Please see below feedback.

 DUE Friday Oct 10, 2014 by 5:00pm


Assignment the minimum length requirement of 10 pages:

(3 points will be deducted for each page that falls short of this requirement)

all earned
Proper use of current APA format
2 possible
1 earned: Please note the format of level 2 headings – You need both level 1 and 2 headings

Content is supported by research
2 possible
  1 earned – reference more often throughout

Good development of ideas and concepts
2 possible
  1 earned
Each level 1 heading should have at least 3 subtopics (for example if I use the level one heading of causes then I should discuss at least 3 causes). THe organization in general is very confusing. Also, I did not see you discuss overcoming the problem.

Grammar and spelling
2 possible

Limited use of direct quotations (only use when absolutely necessary)
2 possible

2 earned
Work on connecting the sections.

The introduction should provide me with a solid understanding of what to expect in your paper

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